Is “That” Really “Very” Necessary

Lift your writing from average to polished with some simple little edits you can do right now.

That and very are two of the most overused words in writing and often the most overlooked by writers. By using these words with care, you’ll find your sentences flowing smoothly, and there’ll be a hint of professionalism others will be aware of, without knowing quite how you did it.

THAT
Get the feel for when to trash the word by mentally discarding it as you edit. If the sentence works without the word, toss it; if the sentence falls apart, keep it.

Examples:

It wasn’t that easy for Lisa to study for exams.

It wasn’t easy for Lisa to study for exams.

The sentence is solid. Toss “that.”

It isn’t that Lisa can’t learn, she’s just busy.

It isn’t Lisa can’t learn, she’s just busy.

In this case, the sentence fell apart. Keep “that.”

Lisa tore down the notice that was posted on the door.

Lisa tore down the notice was posted on the door.

Here you will also need to cut the word “was” to get rid of all the unnecessary words:

Lisa tore down the notice posted on the door.

VERY
This word, too often, takes the place of stronger words or tags along with words that are solid on their own. When “very” is added to a weak word, such as “nice” or “angry,” it is a good indicator that a stronger word choice may be necessary to replace both, or that more description is required.

Examples:

She was very excited about the upcoming party.

She was excited about the upcoming party.

“Excited” is a strong word by itself, but could be replaced by a more vibrant word for increased effect. “Ecstatic” or “impatient” would work, depending on the depth of emotion you’re seeking.

Gordon was very angry when he saw the dent in his car.

Gordon was angry when he saw the dent in his car.

In this case, “angry” by itself is weak. “Livid” would work, but more description would strengthen this, which could require a rewrite.

When Gordon saw the dent in his Porsche, his recent good mood was suddenly replaced by a rage, the likes of which the small town hadn’t seen since the Great Tornado of ‘78.

Get rid of “that” and do it “very” quickly. You’ll see the improvement in your writing immediately.

Kim-Marie Ward is a freelance editor of both non-fiction books and fiction novels, a ghostwriter, and has written several articles for various ezines and newsletters (online and in print). Kim is an author on Writing.Com
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Writing and Walking - Beating Writer’s Block

Writing and walking are a seemingly odd mix of topics for an article, but they go well together. Particularly if you write during breaks in your walk.

Writing Journals

Whether you are writing articles or the great American novel, you will inevitably suffer from writer’s block. A good way to defeat the block is to go for a walk or hike in a park or open local area. Walking gives you a chance to think through things, let your mind wander and clear out the riff raff.

As you walk, your subconscious will be working and kicking out ideas to get you going again. You don’t want to lose these ideas, which can be a problem when you are a few miles from home and your computer. Frankly, nothing is more frustrating than getting an idea and then losing the thread while you hustle home.

I primarily write information articles for web sites. Unlike a novel, the pure volume of articles is problematic. Coming up with hundreds of unique topics can be maddening, particularly if the subject matter is rather dry. Just imagine trying to write 100 articles on tax issues! One tends to end up staring at the wall for hours on end.

I come up with my best ideas while walking on the beach here in San Diego, California. While the beach and tax articles might seem an odd mix, the ghosts of IRS agents apparently congregate on the beach and ideas become plentiful. I’ve tried two methods of keeping track of ideas while walking.

I first tried taking a dictation machine with me, but it didn’t really work out. You would be surprised how loud the ocean is on the recording. I also found it difficult to pick up the thread again when I sat down to listen to my ramblings. Fortunately, writing journals turned out to be a better option.

An author friend of mine that publishes novels suggested taking a writing journal with me on the beach strolls. He apparently had great success working out plot twists for his novels while hiking around Palomar Mountain, a good hiking spot to the east of San Diego. I gave it a try and the rest is history.

I prefer writing journals to dictating for a few reasons. Initially, it is easier to just sit down wherever you are and write out an idea and story lines. I also find it easier to pick up the thread when I plop down in front of my computer to actually start writing.

Writer’s block is a problem for every writer, regardless of the type of writing. If you’re having problems with it, you might try going on a walk and taking a writing journal with you.

Rick Chapo is with NomadJournals.com - makers of diary and writing journals with cases for the outdoors. Blank journals make great gifts for writers. Visit NomadJournalTrips.com for more articles on journal writing.

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Writing Requires Self-Control

The only way to become a writer is to write. That requires a great deal of self-control and dedication, not only writing when the urge is upon you, but even when it is not. That requires seeing the words flow onto the blank page or screen.

Force yourself to sit at your desk or in front of your computer screen and write something, anything until the ideas begin to flow, and flow they will. You will soon learn that what you write when the urge is not there will be as good as when the impulse is strong. Later, when you reread what you wrote, you will be unable to tell what was a struggle or what was an inspiration.

Stay before the bare page or empty screen until it is full. One page is not impossible, and once that page is full, you will find that it is easy to fill two pages or more. Write as quickly as you can think. Do not disrupt the flow of ideas and sentences with concern about grammar, syntax, and other rules.

This is not the time to rewrite. Write quickly, ignoring spelling and punctuation. That can be corrected with rewriting as is the use of the dictionary and thesaurus. The important action is to put words to paper or to screen, to explore your thoughts, to brainstorm, if necessary.

More important is the development of self-control, of dedication, of persistence, and of a work habit. All productive writers have acquired this determination.

Charles O. Goulet has a BA in English literature. He has published several books that are available at http://www.Amazon.com, http://www.Amazon.ca, and many other bookstores.

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